Examiner's Grade
B
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Comment
A well-written answer offering thoughtful points (AO1). Useful connections made amongst female characters. Passivity and powerlessness kept in view throughout. Quotations and specific examples show sound grasp of the text (AO2). A good awareness of context, with Wollstonecraft connection (AO4). Mention of Safie demonstrates an awareness of the other side of the question but needs development (AO3).
For an A grade
- Develop the alternative perspective on women represented by Safie.
- Make further and deeper analysis of language and narrative. Why do no women narrate?
- Express ideas more clearly and develop them in more detail.
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