Examiner's Grade
A
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Comment
There is an excellent focus on the question here, and what is particularly impressive is the way that the question has been thought about carefully and the terms of the question considered (AO1). It is generally well written, and there is some good analysis of language and some excellent narrative links are made (AO2). There is intelligent use of critical viewpoints and theory (AO3) and relevant context (AO4).
For an A* grade
- Aim for a little more detailed analysis of language.
- A little more specific context on 'benevolence' could be added, but don't get sidetracked from the focus.
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