Examiner's Grade
B
The examiner gave this sample answer a Grade B.
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Comment
This answer concentrates on a few points of contrast and analyses these in detail in an organised manner. The playwright’s ideas are clearly understood and appreciated. This is a confident attempt to respond to the task. Expression is not always as fluent as it could be.
For an A grade
- Concentrate on developing appreciation of the playwright’s ideas.
- Focus more on analysis.
- Provide more detailed support.
- Improve expression to help convey more subtle ideas.
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