Examiner's Grade
A
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Comment
This is a critical and sensitive response. Ideas are conveyed with vigour and are expressed very persuasively. There is evidence of original thinking and this is supported with appropriate evidence in the form of embedded quotations. The playwright’s methods are discussed with a light touch. There is a satisfying roundness to the whole answer.
For an A* grade
- Show engagement with the writer’s technique throughout.
- Provide detailed and sophisticated analysis of Miller’s language.
- Include personal and imaginative commentary.
- Comment on the play’s structure and on how the structure enhances ideas and themes.
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