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A*
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The most striking feature of this response is that it successfully concentrates on how Elizabeth’s thoughts and feelings are conveyed rather than explaining what they are. In addition to effective close analysis based on precise detail, there is exploration of connections between the passage and its ‘stage in the novel’. The selection of vocabulary, whether personal or technical, is precise throughout, with clear personal interpretations.
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