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Comment
Good points are made about the extract and relevant points are made about Holmes in other parts of the novella. Relevant quotations are provided and there are a number of interpretations made. There are some references to Conan Doyle's use of language. Context is touched on briefly.
For a Good Level Response
- Develop a more fluent writing style.
- Make greater reference to the effects of language or structure and aim for more confident use of subject terminology.
- Provide more detailed explanations to show deeper understanding.
- Conclude the argument more confidently.
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